Raindrops falling down
Down to the ground
Like tears from the clouds
Drenching the crowds
As they hustle through the streets
Scurrying to meet
Their trains and taxi cabs
That will take them to
Their peaceful retreats
Where they all can play
And forget about the day
As the rain taps, taps, taps
On the window panes
They are warm and dry
And for awhile, tranquil and secure.
2 comments:
Good start. But why put your readers away by writing in blue. Just keep it simple friend.
Your writing would not lose its power if you use white text against a black background.
Thanks for reading.
I write in blue because I love the color blue. It's my favorite color. I don't write in blue for other people or to try to pretty up my writing content. I love to write, but my first love is fine art and graphic art.
My regular readers have not complained about the color and don't seem to mind. Is it difficult for you to see?
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